假如你是李华,你有一个美国的朋友Tom将要来你们学校参加交换生活动。请你根据以下提示,用英语介绍一下你的好朋友张明。
写作要点:
1. How old is he? When is his birthday?
2. What’s his favorite subject? Why does he like it?
3. When does he have his favorite subject?
4. What can he do? What is he good at?
要求:
1. 条理清楚;行文连贯,可适当发挥;
2. 不得出现真实的人名、校名、班级等相关信息;
3. 开头已给出,词数不少于60。
张天悦
Hello,Tom. I\'m Li Hua. I have a good friend. He is a thirteen-year-old boy like you. His birthday is on January1st. Next Sunday is his birthday. I want to go his home and have a party with him. Do you want to go with me! It\'s really interesting.
His favorite subject is English. He thinks it’s useful and fun. You can talk with him in English. He has English classes on Monday and Friday . His English teacher, Mrs. Xiong is great kind. She is very good with students. So all of his classmates like Mrs. Xiong very much. She is very good at English.
He is very good at P.E. He can play basketball and baseball very well. He only has a P.E. class every week. It\'s on Thursday. He also does well in music. He can sing lots of songs. He can play the drums well. He will play the drums next month. Because our school music festival is next month. Can you come then? I think you will be happy to see those music shows.
Do you know who he is? Yes, he is my best friend, Zhang Ming. He is friendly and fun. I think you will make friends with him. Who\'s your best friend ? Please write to me soon!
老师评语:文章条理清晰,要点齐全,语句流畅,句式丰富,从个人基本信息到文化学习再到文体活动。开头设置悬念,最后回答,并且引用了一些连词,使文章过渡自然。
张晨阳
Hello. Tom. I\'m Li Hua. I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Ming. He is thirteen. His birthday is on April 9th.
What\'s his favourite subject? His favourite subject is math. Why? Because he thinks it’s useful and interesting. He has math on Monday, Tuesday, Thursday and Friday.
What can he do? He can play the guitar. And he is good at playing the guitar. What does he do after school? He either plays baseball or plays the guitar after school.
This is my good friend. Do you want to be his friend? I’m looking forward to hearing from you .
老师评语: 语言简洁明了,直接阐述要点,文章结构清晰,能够将课堂上所学知识点准确地用于描写身边的朋友,学用结合,学以致用,老师相信日积月累你的英语水平一定会越来越好!
徐静秋
Hello,Tom I’m Li Hua. I have a good friend, Zhang Ming. He is twelve. I am one year older than him. His birthday is in August and my birthday is in August, too.
Math is his favourite subject, because he thinks it is interesting, but I think it is difficult for me. Zhang Ming and I are in the same school. He has math on Monday, Tuesday, Wednesday and Friday. He doesn’t like history because he thinks it is boring.
Zhang Ming likes P.E. too. Because he thinks exercise is good for his health,he can play football,basketball,volleyball and tennis.He is good at sports, but my P.E. is not very good, so he often helps me with my English. We always play together.
This is my good friend. What about you? Who is your good friend,Tom?
老师评语:本篇英语作文,按照写作的要求介绍了自己的朋友,短文结构合理,内容丰富,从喜欢的科目,喜欢的运动两个方面分别进行了介绍,句式较为丰富,采用了适当的关联词,使短文读起来流畅,自然。
陈玥婷
Hello,Tom I’m Li Hua, I have a good friend, his name is Zhang Ming. He is 13 years old. His birthday is on March 27th. He likes English best, because he thinks it’s easy for him. He always helps me with English. He has English classes from Monday to Wednesday. He usually tells me: practice makes perfect. If you want to improve your English,you should read English for half an hour every morning.
He also does well in swimming. He often goes to swim with his brother. He thinks it is relaxing.
This is my friend. Please remember: his name is Zhang Ming.
王梓茜
Hello, Tom. I’m Li Hua. I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Ming. He is a good boy. He is twelve years old. His birthday is on December 1st. He is older than me.
His favorite subject is history. He thinks history is very useful and interesting. And he likes his history teacher very much. He has history classes from Monday to Friday. He can also tell stories but he wants to join the art club. Do you know why? Because he is good at drawing. After class, he usually plays basketball with his classmates. He thinks doing exercise every day is good for health.
Zhang Ming is a helpful student. He can speak English very well, so he always helps me with my English. Do you want to make friends with him?
老师评语:该篇作文结构完整,要点清晰,有适当的拓展。从姓名,年龄及爱好等方面描述了你的好朋友,也很好的运用了之前我们讲过的话题中的句型,希望接下来你能继续积累好词好句,并加以运用。
李若宣
Hello, Tom! I\'m Li Hua. I have a good friend. His first name is Ming and his last name is Zhang. He is twelve years old. Let me tell you something about him now.
His birthday is on January 1st. His favorite subject is P.E. Because he thinks it\'s easy and fun. We usually play basketball in P.E. class. It is one of his favorite sports. He likes Kobe too. And he wants to be a basketball player like him. He can play the guitar well. He always plays the guitar at home on weekends. He also has good habits. He exercises every day and goes to bed early. And he likes eating vegetables and fruit.They are healthy. He never eats ice- cream after dinner, so he has a healthy life.
Welcome to our school! You can make friends
with Zhang Ming. He is friendly and nice! We all like him very much.
老师评语:文章结构清晰,行文连贯。让我们非常详细地了解了你的朋友。过渡自然,句式丰富!
刘欣怡
Hello,Tom! I\'m Li Hua. I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Ming.
He is 13 years old. His birthday is on January 24th. I am a little shy but he is an outgoing boy. So his favorite subject is P.E. He thinks it\'s relaxing. But you know, I don\'t like P.E.We have P.E. on Tuesday,Wednesday and Friday. So Zhang Ming always enjoys these three days. He spends most of time playing sports with his classmates.
He also can do many things like playing the chess, drawing some pictures and singing. And he is very good at speaking English. So I think you will be happy to make friends with him.
Welcome to our school and join us!
老师评语:你有一位和你截然不同的朋友,你对朋友的观察细致入微。全文条理清晰,衔接自然,可见功底深厚!
吴予宸
Hello, Tom. I’m Li Hua. I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Ming. He is twelve. His birthday is on September 12th.
His favorite subject is P.E.. Because he thinks it is easy and interesting. The P.E. class is on Monday, Wednesday and Friday. He also can play the violin. But he is good at playing the piano. He thinks it is easy and relaxing. I don’t think so.
He has a good habit. He always does morning exercises after breakfast. He doesn’t like eating ice-cream. Because he thinks it is not good for him. He never eats ice-cream. He doesn’t want to be fat. I think he is a good boy. Do you want to see him?
老师评语:该篇作文书写漂亮,结构完整,重点明确,表达简洁合理。很好的运用了课内句型去表达想法和感受,从喜好,习惯等方面很细致地描述了好朋友,并且适当拓展了句型。个别表达如果注意语言的准确性就更棒了!
余林霏
His name is Zhang Ming and he is a friendly boy.He is 14 years old. Oh!He is older than us. He\'s very tall.
We have 8 classes from Monday to Friday. Zhang Ming is very clever and his favourite subject is English. He often speaks English with me! Do you know why he likes it?I think it is easy and interesting for him but I don\'t like English.
The class finishes at 5:00pm. And after that, he often plays basketball with classmates on the playground. He plays basketball very well. He often teaches me how to play basketball. He wants to be a basketball star!
Oh! His birthday is on January 30th. His birthday is next week . He asks his good friends to come to his birthday party.
This is my good friend.
老师评语:该篇文章结构完整,要点齐全,有适当的拓展,能综合使用各个话题中的句型,做到了学以致用。但是如果结尾句能适当表达个人对好朋友的评价就更好了。
徐佳鑫
Hello, Tom, I’m Li Hua . I have a good friend. His name is Zhang Ming. He is 12 years old. His birthday is on June 1st. It’s Children’s day.
He is in Beijing with his parents now. He doesn’t have brothers or sisters. He is a student in Xinhua Middle School. And he is in Class 1, Grade 7. English is his favorite subject. Because he thinks it is easy and interesting. He has English from Monday to Friday. And he can speak English very well.
After class, he always plays basketball games with us. Of all sports, he likes basketball best. He says it is relaxing for him. And he also plays the piano in the evening . He is good at it. It can also make him excited. He loves it.
He is great. Do you want to make friends with him? Please call him at 759-8191. I think you can be his good friend.
老师评语:该篇文章不仅完整表达了各个要点,还对所学知识点进行了相应的拓展,最后有个人感受,使文章更加完整了。这篇文章体现了你不错的综合语言运用能力,希望你继续积累好词好句,让语言更加丰富。
吴泓萱
My friend \' s name is Zhang Ming . He is thirteen years old , his
birthday is on March 8th. Zhang Ming \' s favorite subject is math , he thinks it \' s useful and easy to learn . I think so , too. And we have math classes on Monday , Tuesday , Thursday and Friday .Oh , I forget , he can also play basketball , he plays it well and he gets a lot of medals at school . We are very proud of him , he is so great !
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